Do not seek me in the shadows of the unknown, instead remember me in all the glory that I once was.
Do not seek me in the sadness of another's eyes, instead look for me in the things that I once loved.
Do not seek grief for my absence, instead cling to the existence of my memory.
Do not seek me in your moments of weakness, instead find strength in the journey that is now set before the both of us.
Do not seek me in my empty room, instead believe that I left this earth with a much greater calling.
Do not seek me in death, seek me in the the things I left behind, the lives that I touched, the laughter I shared, the joy that I brought, the life that I embraced, the memories I created and there you will find me once more.....
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12-14-10 10:59 AM #1
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A poem that I wrote...
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12-14-10 03:24 PM #2
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Reflections of your life eh...
ETA; Okay I can't help myself, I wrote a poem in the 3rd grade...
Spring has sprung the grass is riz, I wonder where the flowers is?
(I had help)
Job Security...
Ecclesiastes 8:11...
Because sentence against an evil work is not executed speedily, therefore the heart of the sons of men is fully set in them to do evil.
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12-14-10 04:41 PM #3
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...... wow......
* I wrote and read it for my grandfather's funeral, yesterday actually made 3 yrs ago * sigh.. it never gets easier I guess *
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04-11-11 06:22 PM #4
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That was a GREAT poem, sad but great!
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04-11-11 10:21 PM #5
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thank you!
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04-11-11 11:23 PM #6
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I'm not so sure the poem is sad. Originally Posted by flowerpower
It offers living through remembrances; as well as hope and solace that there will be warm embraces once again.This career is not a sprint, it is a marathon.
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04-11-11 11:28 PM #7
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Originally Posted by Cat_Doc
Sounds like marriage."Peach"
Never attribute to malice what can be adequately explained by stupidity.
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04-12-11 07:26 AM #8
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LOL. Classic. Originally Posted by canuckofapeach
This career is not a sprint, it is a marathon.
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04-12-11 12:47 PM #9
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Originally Posted by Cat_Doc
depending on your religious beliefs... in other words I could be wrong but I do believe a heaven exist but that's just * my* meek perception....we always remember our loved ones through memories a favorite song a favorite place etc...
@ peach sometimes so true... when your not ready to beat them ;)
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04-23-11 04:00 PM #10
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That is a very wonderful pome. it sure does reflect's life's of both men and wemon in LE but also in the arm services.
I read it to my wife, She said it sounds like it's talking about Jesus.What I think we need more than anything else in our society today is a sence of personal responsibility for what we do.From what I see and hear and read, no one is responsible anymore; there's always some factor in a person's life or background to excuse him. There is a price to the passage through life, and regardless of what's happened to each of us in the past, part of the price is responsibility for our actions in the present.
By JOHN DOUGLAS PIONEER AND MASTER OF PROFILING FBI.
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04-26-11 06:06 PM #11
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Thanks.... Originally Posted by sosteve
not Jesus but a pretty close comparison he was a wonderful man...
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06-18-11 07:23 PM #12
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Just wrote the sequel. Originally Posted by pac201
Reflections of your life eh...
ETA; Okay I can't help myself, I wrote a poem in the 3rd grade...
Spring has sprung the grass is riz, I wonder where the flowers is?
(I had help)
The fall has fell the leaves have falled, I wonder why the trees go bald?
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