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    I need help....

    writing my vampire series..... any suggestions......:D

    running and ducking......

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    Quote Originally Posted by Signal4 View Post
    Vampires suck blood.
    lol.... you guys probably feel like you are being attacked by vampires

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    Quote Originally Posted by SANE-A30 View Post
    writing my vampire series..... any suggestions......:D

    running and ducking......
    lol , although I am REALLY writing a book about vampires in my spare time I was being facetious when I posted this ;)

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    I have a difficult time as well.
    But this is what I try to do with any type of writing.

    Write down the basics first. Get the characters down with a short bio on each one.
    On the character that's a vampire... what is his/her strengths? Weaknesses?
    Mix it up a bit... cause you don't have to use old school style on your vamps.
    Maybe they can only be killed if they're decapitated. Or maybe only fire.
    I've even read- can't recall where tho- that Vampires can't cross over rose pedals. Go figure that one out LOL

    Write down a basic idea of how you see the story first... and then go back and "flesh out" the rest.
    With the flood of vampire books and movies, it's getting difficult to be original.

    Of course, sometimes that's easier said than done.
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    Quote Originally Posted by locokarma View Post
    I have a difficult time as well.
    But this is what I try to do with any type of writing.

    Write down the basics first. Get the characters down with a short bio on each one.
    On the character that's a vampire... what is his/her strengths? Weaknesses?
    Mix it up a bit... cause you don't have to use old school style on your vamps.
    Maybe they can only be killed if they're decapitated. Or maybe only fire.
    I've even read- can't recall where tho- that Vampires can't cross over rose pedals. Go figure that one out LOL

    Write down a basic idea of how you see the story first... and then go back and "flesh out" the rest.
    With the flood of vampire books and movies, it's getting difficult to be original.

    Of course, sometimes that's easier said than done.
    LOl I was'nt being for real with the help I was being "smart" you of all people should NEVER have writers block.... still waiting on the rest of my email I might work on mine some in a few !

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    Okay... did you get part three?
    I sent 1-3 so far to the email you gave me.
    Let me know please... and I can resend it.

    And yes... I get writer's block and I hate it. Such a pain sometimes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by locokarma View Post
    Okay... did you get part three?
    I sent 1-3 so far to the email you gave me.
    Let me know please... and I can resend it.

    And yes... I get writer's block and I hate it. Such a pain sometimes.
    um yeah I think I might have i will recheck my email though , I was up to Matt in the tent that's the last part that I read on the orginal. my inbox gets flooded by facebook notifications and junk mail , I should create a whole new account

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    Whatever you do, make sure your vampire(s) doesn't sparkle in the sunlight or otherwise emasculate them as Stephenie Meyer so successfully did.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PathosLogos View Post
    Whatever you do, make sure your vampire(s) doesn't sparkle in the sunlight or otherwise emasculate them as Stephenie Meyer so successfully did.
    :D my vampires don't glitter, they drink blood and morph.......

    on a serious note I think I am the "ONLY" girl on the planet that has only read one book and has not seen any of the movies........

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    Quote Originally Posted by SANE-A30 View Post
    um yeah I think I might have i will recheck my email though , I was up to Matt in the tent that's the last part that I read on the orginal. my inbox gets flooded by facebook notifications and junk mail , I should create a whole new account

    No rush. Just let me know when you have time :-)
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    Quote Originally Posted by locokarma View Post
    No rush. Just let me know when you have time :-)
    ok i just went through my email and you had sent me parts 1 & 2 and yes I read it my schedule at work is about to change on Feb 6th I'm going to be a super busy girl..... working every Friday-Mon ( 12 hr shifts) school Tues and Thurs mornings! not very excite about the scheduled glitch but what can I do :(

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    Quote Originally Posted by SANE-A30 View Post
    :D my vampires don't glitter, they drink blood and morph.......

    on a serious note I think I am the "ONLY" girl on the planet that has only read one book and has not seen any of the movies........
    You're not alone. Though personally, I've neither read the books nor watched the movies...and refuse to ever do so. However, I think it was that a friend of mine had to read the books for a creative writing class, so I witnessed endless quotes from Ms. Meyer's "masterpiece(s)."

    Best of luck with your book though!

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    Quote Originally Posted by PathosLogos View Post
    You're not alone. Though personally, I've neither read the books nor watched the movies...and refuse to ever do so. However, I think it was that a friend of mine had to read the books for a creative writing class, so I witnessed endless quotes from Ms. Meyer's "masterpiece(s)."

    Best of luck with your book though!
    Thank you! the vampire book actually started out as a joke between me and a friend of mine that is a published author he has two books published but he can write the most AMAZING poetry, yes I am addicted to ADEN FISHER... so it was a joke between us he made the comment he wanted to write a vampire series I told him that I wanted to also that he could write all the poetry in my book for me....well after I started writing it and shared it with a few people they told me to keep going....

    I have also started writing a book about my son being born premature his struggle through the last few years.... this was inspired by Jodi picoults book " HANDLE WITH CARE" ---- that is a * MUST READ*.... I have felt every emotion that mother in that book has felt....

    I've always wanted to write a book, the vampire book I highly doubt I will ever finish the book about my kid I am determined to finish

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