Overall, decent article. 2 things though, IMO should not have used the word "mistakes" in paragraph 6 - makes it sound like a shooting in those circumstances was wrong/erroneous (which is not necessarily so); and last sentence of paragraph 11, delete "necessary" - per graham vs connor, we don't use necessary any more - "objectively reasonable" instead.
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